First, how to get friend . some of friend you knows him from your works , or in your school, or your neighborhood , this the best choice to get your true friends. some of this friend still normal friend you knows him certain period, and the other kind of friends are the true friend its too hard to find its and its have many detail to say this my true friend .
Second , the true friend its have many detail once of this to be ( honest,sincere, and secretary,) this three detail change from friend to true friend , to say this my true friend when he stay with you in
the hard time not in easy time, and to find him when you broke, and when you had many problem to help you to solve them . If you find friend like this detail your lucky ,because some time your brother don,t stay with this you in hard point .
Third, when I has in my country I has two friends, this two friends my feeling hims like my brother.
I must see him every day ,and if any day came and I don't saw him I felt something miss me .
because this two friend I saw him in the harder time to me see this example: once a day I entered the hospital for 5 days this two friend every days drove three hours to saw me and three back every days. How to love your friend,when you need him ,and you found him beside you in the hard time.
finally, every one lucky to find true friend , and don' think if he smile to you he love you . Every one should be care full when he choice her friend maybe some of friend need you for your moneyor for your position. That what I want to say about friend ,
Hi Hassan,
ReplyDeleteThis still needs some work.
First, look at all your commas. Do you need them or actually need a period.
Then, look at your tense and plurals. For example, you have kind when you want kinds. Also, you have 'have' instead of 'has' in your first paragraph. You are still making mistakes with has, had, and have. Please go over these rules!
I am not going to grade this until you have all of these minor mistakes worked out. Redo this!
:-) kristi