big or small. Now we can see the parent play with her daughter play playstation and know if ask any kids what you need gift he say I need "video-game". Video-game its a new technology its have positive thing and negative thing.
The positive thing for the video-game make good relation between the family when you see the father playing with her daughter , or you see the kids playing with each other and smile batter than fight. That have in video-game games learn how to study the alphabetic for small kids sand mathematic games kids this idea make the kids love to study and make the kids smart .
the negative thing for video-game its make the kids love to stay in home don't make play sports spent long time on it some time the kids forget to make her study and he don't like to go to schools , make it laze . and some times dangers. Because the kids spent all the money to buys games , and not only the kids some time the old people like it .
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The video games its good idea, but to know how to use it , and some time bad for kids. this when we tell the kids study first and when you finnish your study you can play. and make time to play not all the day . the parent must buy for her kids smart games to make her kids smart not only fight or race .
Hi Hassan,
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I like how you have both the positive and the negative aspects here. However, you still have a lot of grammatical mistakes. Did you read this before posting it? Check this over.
I can help you with this tomorrow --will you be on campus?
:-) Kristi
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yes teacher i will be their tomorrow at 6
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